Internet
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Information to Include
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1st paragraph-Introduction
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Current situation: it’s now easier to use internet than before,
whether using telephone, computer, or tablet.
Thesis statement: People use the internet given the convenience to
access it, but behind that there are advantages and disadvantages.
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2nd paragraph-For argument
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Advantages:
1.
It helps people to improve and increase knowledge with the ease of
finding information;
2.
The internet makes it easy to communicate with each other using the
chat application;
3.
It helps people to buy something using an online shop.
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3rd paragraph- again argument
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Disadvantages:
1.
The existence of pornography that can lead to sexual harassment;
2.
Some people become addict to online gaming so that it can make people
lazy to work and study;
3.
Excessive internet use can mean that people hardly communicate each
other because they are always on the phone.
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4th paragraph-conclusion
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Sum up the main argument: to conclude, spending on the internet can
have many advantages for people, but it also has disadvantages behind its
convenience.
Argument: in my opinion, I think internet is a very useful tool for
people with ease and technology, from the benefits provides by the internet.
However, we should be careful not to use internet for negative thing.
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It is now easier to use internet
than before, whether using telephone, computer, or tablet. There is no doubt that
many people are spending more and more time online. People use the internet
given the convenience to access it, but behind that there are advantages and
disadvantages.
One advantage of the internet is that people
can find information easily. This people can undertake improve knowledge with
the ease of finding information. Another positive aspect of the internet is
that people can communicate with each other using the chat application. This is
also a good way of keeping in touch with friends and family around the world. Another
positive aspect of internet is that people can buy goods online. So that it
will help people get items far away too as long as connected to online shop.
On
the other hand, there are also negative consequences. Some people become addict
to online gaming. This can have negative effect such as lazy to work and study.
Another negative aspect of the internet is that people can access pornography
sites on website easily. This can make people become addict and also that can
lead to sexual harassment. In addition, excessive internet use can mean that some people hardly to talk
to their families because they are always on the computer.
To conclude, spending time on the
internet can have many advantages for people, but it also has disadvantages
behind it convenience. In my opinion, I think internet is very useful tool for
people with ease and technology from the benefits provides by the internet. However,
we should be careful not to use internet for negative thing.
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DeleteIt is now easier to use internet than before, whether using telephone, computer, or tablet. There is no doubt that many people are spending more and more time online. People use the internet given the convenience to access it, but behind that there are advantages and disadvantages.
ReplyDeleteOne advantage of the internet is that people can find information easily. This people can undertake improve knowledge with the ease of finding information. Another positive aspect of the internet is that people can communicate with each other using the chat application. This is also a good way of keeping in touch with friends and family around the world. Another positive aspect of internet is that people can buy goods online. So that it will help people get items far away too as long as connected to online shop.
On the other hand, there are also negative consequences. Some people become addict to online gaming. This can have negative effect such as lazy to work and study. Another negative aspect of the internet is that people can access pornography sites on website easily. This can make people become addict and also that can lead to sexual harassment. In addition, excessive internet use can mean that some people hardly to talk to their families because they are always on the computer.
To conclude, spending time on the internet can have many advantages for people, but it also has disadvantages behind it convenience. In my opinion, I think internet is very useful tool for people with ease and technology from the benefits provides by the internet. However, we should be careful not to use internet for negative thing.